the African safari
By:Idalina
The African safari is a very interesting place to explore. There are hundreds of animals and over a hundred different species. These are the top 5 animals you’ll find. First off, lions, lions as you may know lions are the king of the jungle fun fact did you know that a lion's roar can be heard up to 1 mile also lions move in packs that consist mostly of females
If your not interested in seeing lions then you’ll definitely find cape buffaloes fascinating they are huge creatures weighing almost a ton. They keep their huge figure by eating as much grass as they can find. You’ll also find the African elephant. Did you know that baby elephants suck their trunks?
Towards eastern Africa you’ll find giraffes. Ever wonder why giraffes have blue tongues? Well they have blue tongues because their tongues are mostly out of their mouth to pick leaves so they need extra protection from the sun. Last but not least ostriches, you may know Ostriches for being able to run fast and that's true ostriches can run 40 miles in one hour ever wonder why? It's because they have elasticity in their joints which lets them run so fast.
REVISION 1.1 (by Romeo L.)
I like the statements in regards to the animals and their traits, but I do thing your essay lacks geographical information. (Constructive Criticism)
ReplyDeletei like how it was all came together with the animals traits and the information that being given
ReplyDeletei like the pictures and how you explained what you was talking about
ReplyDeletelooks like a place where I would visit in the future. Nice explanation. Great work!!
ReplyDeleteI was never aware of the elasticity ostriches have in their joints.
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